So, commenters are rebutting my interpretation of Brent's line in my previous post.
I still posit that the pause after "with" makes no sense, and that my way is better, even if Brent is out of breath.
I proffer a challenge:
Send me a recording of your interpretation, your reading of the line, and I will put it online next to my own. We will call it CADENCE FIGHT!
Well, maybe not, but it might be fun. (Maybe we can get Scott to send us his version, so we can see where the original thinking was...)
Send your mp3s to fakescottmccloud at gmail dot com.