Alright, this one actually made me chuckle. Especially Brent's Egyptian pooping man symbol.
My only nitpick today is some of the punctuation. Francis in panel one should have an exclamation because he's, you know, exclaiming something. And Cole's line in the last panel sounds odd when phrased in the form of a question.
EDIT: Grammar has been fixed. No nits left to pick today.
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oh noes! Brents gone all Bubba Ho-Tep!
Grammar problems fixed. Thaks for catching that.
I'm now prepared to say, based on the past few weeks, that PVP no longer makes me sad.
PVP makes me happy!
Stephen - a truer word neer was said, nice arc Kurtz ;D
Heh. Tut-B-Gone.
I also like to think that Brent is saying "Man..." in mummy-ese :P
The last few strips are really good comedy, well written and very well drawn. The plot is straightforward, but the strength here is in the punchlines or in the random gags (like today's).
MOAR!
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